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we started to go to the mountain board, the water flow down from the mountain section to form a waterfall which dropped from a distance like a curtain fell from the sky, the more the more the waterfall up the hill, the more spectacular! ! Rushing water sound, the sound of leaves intertwined together to compose a song of magnificent symphony.
our shuttle in the bush,
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soon to lunch time, lunch time is happy, the time may be fast today, yet we have to end the journey. Set foot on the way back home, roadside birds are kept shouting, as if singing is left for us; have kept flapping wings circling in our car window,
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day's journey, greatly benefit from the miracle of Nature is very much impressed, so beautiful, the world practice the heartless, so whether a person exist?
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